If anyone is actually reading this, I'm actually interested in feedback. Don't bother with the, hey, you covered time-units _twice_. I know. I'll be editing that kind of stuff later. But if anyone is going, dude, more of the dancing, or, enough with the talking, please blow something up, I'd love to hear it. Also, if you think one or more of the characters is completely unlikable in a bad way, I'm interested in that, too.
In case you're wondering what the hell this is all about, short form: write a novel in November. I started two weeks late, but intend to hit 50K by the end of the month come hell or hiring problems at the library.
The extremely first drafty first draft can be found at:
I just wrapped chapter 10. It's in 10 .pdf files and the contents page has a very brief plot setup.